“I’ve always wanted to be with an older woman,” the 29-year-old boy says in an email.
“What would you do with her?” Rachel sends back.
She’s in her late-forties and often wonders if a younger guy would be able to satisfy her. She doesn’t want to waste her time on an unsatisfactory encounter. She thought of a series of questions to ask him, knowing his answers would tell the tale of his abilities to please her:
“Where do you see this older woman?
What is she wearing?
What thoughts are racing through your mind as you watch her?
Are you aroused? What sensations are going through your body?
What do you say to her and what is her reaction?
Supposing she wants to be intimate, where do you go?
What do you do to her and what does she do to you?”
Finished with her questions, Rachel ends the email with a demand … “Be specific.”
Re-reading her email to this boy, Rachel realized that whatever he sent back could possibly be the makings of a good story. Sadly, though not unexpectedly, he never answered.
That’s how young boys are … all talk and no action.
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